by b32145623
This is one of my absolute favorite stories on this site. Extremely sexy characters, and it's nice to see a protagonist with enough of a moral compass to stay away from anything nonconsentual. I can't wait to read more about this "competition" between R and A. And just as a matter of personal preference, I'd love to see you do more encounters during work, like in Chapter 1. Seems like both Maria and Kelly could be useful to R and A in their manipulations, too...
I started reading Ch. 3 out of curiousity, and stopped after the first few paragraphs when I realized how great this story was. I hadn't read the first two chapters, but I definitely have now! Your submissions are top notch and I hope to read more in this erotic saga. Thanks so much for writing.
Without the year long break in between preferably! Love all the characters in this story.
This is a very good story line, very different what I've read in here. Please keep going it's fun, innocent and exciting all together