All Comments on 'The New Owners - 04 April'

Great story, thanks for sharing these chapters with us.

This is a really well written story, and I love how real Marilyn and her gradual descent into humiliation is. Thanks for writing it. The degradation is just lovely.

Unbelievably believable characters, plot, the whole nine! I'm thrilled to have gotten the chance to take all of this in. I'm much like your Marilyn in so many ways, every word of this was devoured by my truly submissive soul. Thank you so much for sharing it here, and I'll be by to see the rest of it on your linked site too! :)

This is the third chapter of an entire book. Read it at

www.smashwords.com/books/view/67395

Really good - I bought the book on Smashwords....

More! Please....

Bil Davis