All Comments on 'The New Roommate's Predicament'

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arrowglassarrowglassover 6 years ago
Can't wait to see where you go with this!

I never saw that coming...now waiting for Ch. 02.

aggies1966aggies1966over 6 years ago
good story

Nice surprise ending. Cant wait to see what Paul is getting himself into!

AirSearch1AirSearch1over 6 years ago
Excellant story

Please tell me that there will be future chapters. We must find out what happens next. Will Paul become her new boyfriend?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A new roomate with a twist!

What a complete surprise ending!!! Well written!

storm_usmcstorm_usmcover 6 years ago
Could've done without peeing

But all in all a good story, try to add more to it. Build up some details and develop the characters. Good start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Next

Where is chapter 2? Really enjoyed the first.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Still waiting

And we are all still waiting for ch 2

ncng3ncng3about 5 years ago
Good

You should do chapter two on that one. Lots of possibilities.

maddictmaddictalmost 5 years ago
Hurry Paul

Let's play, playah. Paul I hope you don't have the knife in view, she just might have to wait untill you buy one to be released.

You better learn the ropes, and be ready for Thursday. Don't be a Pussy.

'\!/'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Two years gone....

No follow up?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Voted 5 because I need to see this again the next time I search for hot roommate stories

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