All Comments on 'The New Slave Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
so fucking hot

i cant wait to see jasons revenge and god i wanna know what master looks like

metajinxmetajinxover 12 years ago

please don't make him a blood relative, I beg you! Your story is definitely too hot for something like that! :D

LilDiscoLilDiscoover 12 years ago
sorry but

This is to metajinxs comment but i'm sorry who every martin makes master be its gunna be hot no matter who it is, all i beg is to please not stop this story line anytime soon i check three times a day to see if hes updated it

vestspetvestspetover 12 years ago
Great story

I bet that Master is one of Daniel's teachers. Someone who would know the back story between Daniel and Joe & Shane. I mean.... That was a major coincidence that Master just happened along to find Daniel after Joe and Shane jumped him and how did Master find Daniel at his house so quickly. And he acts like a good teacher would, using praise as well as aversion to train Daniel and then his tormentors so quickly.

That's just my theory. I could be wrong. But, imagine the possibilities that would create after Master reveals himself to Daniel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
~SPOILER ALERT~!!!!!!!

At one point I thought the Masters identity was a blood relative.

Im thinking that its Daniels father.

This is just my guess and I do not know if im correct.

I hope its not incest.

Even though I found the twincest in this chapter to be highly orgasmic :D

ticklishsolesticklishsolesabout 6 years ago
Exhausted!

OMG! I have simply got to find a similar situation to find myself in. I’d love to slave!

Ticklishsoles

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 2 years ago

A very dynamic scene. Have to wonder why admit someone you hadn't invited. Well, it will surely make for an interesting story don the line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wonderful story I have been used in my younger days and loved it also you are a great writer and don’t let anyone tell you differently

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