All Comments on 'The Newlyweds Next Door Ch. 01'

And a first submission at that! What an awesome beginning -- you simply can't leave it here! Very well done, and welcome, new author! I look forward to reading a lot more of your work. Thank you and please have five big shiny stars from me!

since you raped the wife and then had the husband don't you think it should be in non consent?

Should be in Non-Consent

This is nonconsent playing dress up as bdsm. With stories like this, the category does matter. It is this type of thing that gives bdsm a bad reputation and stunts acceptance. In this case, it also completely negates the technical quality of the writing. In other words, by placing it in a consensual category you have made your story suck. If you had been honest and accurate by posting it in noncon, I would have given it a solid review.

You can contact the moderators and request it be moved.

Great story, hope you don't leave it at that. And please ignore the anonymous comments that has been given.

I love this so far. Love how she is taking control of them. Keep it going.

This story in this category is what gives BDSM a bad reputation. It is non-consensual as well as not safe, or sane. Leaving a woman on a Sabian all those hours would be damaging especially when she sped it up to allow release, as it was not just one release but continual release beyond her endurance. Feminizing a man without consent is just wrong in every way if he has not consented.

Reading this was a waste of precious minutes of my life I'll never get back. Fortunately now I know better than to read any more of this series.

Good story but there is an easy way out, get dressed and dont goto work, instead he goes to a police station and he tells them that his wife is being held captive and and they are both being blackmailed, he then goes to the house with the police where they find his wife behind held against her will, the woman gets arrested, as this is happening the passwords on their social media accounts get changed, police use the pics she took as evidence they they were being blackmailed woman goes to prison for a long ass time, hisband amd wofe walk away scott free

Husband being changed. The neighbor woman owns the town

Could use more time to build up to this

'He leads her out into Olivia's back garden and helps her onto a seat before going back to getting his drink' - you changed from past tense to present tense then back again.

You also kept changing the wife and the neighbours's name.

A total fuck up.

STUPID!

stpuid, call the police

These stories with forced chastity never make sense? Just say them they should take it of or u go to the police and when they say no go to the police and say they drugged and than confined u in this shit. They get arrested and depending they not only pay a fine but go tomorision and u can go....

love b oliva's slave knowing i do anything she orders

I want to be Carl.

I want to be carl or should I say crystal. Hurt me please

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