All Comments on 'The Next Big Thing'

What the fuck is wrong with you? No, your not a normal guy!

"I made a bet with him that you would not cheat on me. I lost."

Super Hot Story. I loved it. My fantasy is middle aged women getting a really great fuck from a black guy without all the demeaning crap that is in most of the IR stories on this site. Well done and keep it up please.

the morale of the story : never bet on your wife's fidelity. What will happen now ? Like one of the reader's suggested, just tell her why and where your car is gone.

If this happened to me, I would also ask to send me the other DVD's as well to remember her by after the divorce.

Double standard ? Yes, he admitted he cheated once before. I would think she may have done the same for, by her own admission, she didn't seem to be the shy or prudish wife he thought she was. Well, who knows.

you and your wife wife are not normal either. You had to show what kind of a writer you are Ie a wimp husband writer because you yourself are a wimp..your story is sickening and you are sickening marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

waste was what we have here,paper and pen.

not the slightest idea what you're getting into

WE loved your story - very erotic! Time for the husband to invite that big cock to his home so he can see it sliding in and out of his wife's pussy for real! Maybe she'll suck him while that black cock wears her sweet little cunt out!!!

Thanks for writing!

Nick and Tanya

Your wife's a slut, haveing unprotected sex with a nigger,you lose your 100,000.00 car in a bet with neighbor and your worried about what? Jesus, another one of these writers,where the fuck do they come from.

Another dumb story, not worth reading. I really hate stories like this.

That's the real problem not the story which I loved by the way.

Pay no attention to Mrs Grundy. That asshole wouldn't know erotic fiction if it fucked him. He just likes to beat his meat and then try to make himself fell better by writing stupid nasty comments.

What about the C.D. of the slut wife that the horn dog neighbor has. Blackmail, internet, sell to highest bidder? This would be a nightmare, not some hot fantasy. People don't give low scores to stories they find hot or jack off reading, a lot of people just find wimp husbands disgusting.

grossingly gibberishingly gross

Perhaps someday this writer will acknowledge that he is really into black cocks and will do anything to pimp out his mum to watch them.<P>

You don't arouse writer, but you do anger the atypical male by your apparent addiction to sick male self humiliation and male self disrespect.<P>

Perhaps it takes a sordid, sick below human convention watching cock fetish to gayly excite you since nothing else will anymore.<P>

Kinda sad - especially for anyone around you. So sick one, get some help soon before any meaningful arousal is forever lost in jaded numbness.

Why do these fuckwits read stories that they know will upset them?

I thought it was clever. Why did you stop where you did?

Thanks for writing.

it in a bet to Derrik concerning her faithfulness and she failed and that he was going to use the CD to divorce her slut ass. He would tell her that he lost a car and she lost a marriage.

would not have read it. YOu can write the next chapter where he shoots all concerned then commits suicide. Sound familiar?

It is 'would HAVE', 'should HAVE', and 'could HAVE', not should of would of and could of.

I would like to replace her with my Wife Sonia, just could not help dreaming her into the act. evein_malika@yahoo.com

The stupid Cuda would be 'given' to the asshole as a coffin. Or, if that is not to your liking, just direct it toward his garage; at 100 MPH. If no heart for any of that, just tell her the truth; I lost it betting you loved me!

hey Bob, please write more like this, so very hot, i felt his cockgoing in ME!!! the way you explained it, hahaha

YOU write shit so you will get shit for a score, Eat shit and DIE!!!!!

Made me cum hard

This story sucks. Cuck wimps rejoice!

I just don't get it. And the wife.... she needs to move on into big cock land on her own and turn tricks on street corners

Jesus Christ it's would/could have not would/could of

As soon as the soon-to-be cuck bets his loving wife's fidelity we know she's gonna be sucking and fucking somebody else. Not only is the husband going to lose the fancy car he bet but,he's probably lose his wife too. Now that she's experienced a BBC,Cucky's teeny weenie just won't be enough for her. Guess she's too old to be preggers but STDs are certainly possible. ~In the end he should just divorce the unfaithful twat,send copies of the video to all of her family and friends and post prominently on-line,and move a thousand miles away.

just another boring sissy loser and heartless Cunt wife story.

Cuck tale, avoid it like the plague, this one is just plain awful

Scores 1/5

CUCK!! CUCK!!! CUCK!!! STUPID STORY> JUST PLAIN STUPID!!!

I couldn't get past the idea that the protagonist was so "high and mighty", yet stupid enough to get drunk (#1) with the asshole and (#2) actually admit to infidelity. That was the point I KNEW this was a story for idiots. Top that steaming pile of shit with a "bet". You have the makings of a boatload of California horseshit no reasonable human can withstand.

Take it to Sacremento, we aint buyin!

1 start - stupid cuck/wimp crap

Well written. I like stories where a wife suddenly finds herself behaving in a manner different than her nature.

Just tell Samantha that you drunk-bet the 'Cuda on her fidelity and lost, and BTW, if she pops a mulatto child, she'll be a 49-yr old single mother.