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Click here"I didn't ever imagine feeling this good!"
Their tongues darted in an out.
"That was fucking amazing!"
"Darling, I don't know about this door we opened, but you are an incredible lover," Steve declared.
"And! We are going to have to do something about that filthy mouth of yours, young lady!" he continued, almost horrified at the thought that there was absolutely nothing he would do to put a stop to it.
"Aaawww, daddy. Are you saying you didn't like fucking your baby girl's tight, juicy cunt?"
Uncomfortably reaching back, Steve swatted Maddie's ass and she yelped.
"You just said it. I am still your father," he responded with a smile that asserted his authority but dared her to keep it up.
"I love you."
"I love you, too."
At that, Steve sat his daughter on the edge of the bed, removing her shoes, lingerie, and stockings. It was with a small sense of loss that Maddie accepted his service. Not only had her attire served her well, but more than before, it had become an extension of her being. That loss faded however, as Steve led her into his bed, both of them glorying in their nakedness together.
- COMMENTS
Brett78xover 9 years agoVery nicely written! Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination.
JLCCover 9 years agoAuthorThe Lit system isn't connecting Chapter 2 yet. If you are reading for the first time, you'll find it here.
www.literotica.com/s/the-next-chapter-ch-02
JLCCover 9 years agoAuthor"As almost always happens, she sets her sights and let's him think he is in control as he steers himself right to where she wants him."
Seems to me it is about an even split between that scenario and the (near) abusive dad who spanks his slut daughter into submission.
Anyhow, chapter two is well underway but undergoing a huge revector. Hope y'all will enjoy!
JLCCover 9 years agoAuthorThere is a chapter 2 for sure. In its original form the story picked up at what will now be chapter 3. While most of this story revolved around Maddie and Steve, it has been seriously modified from the original. That has left me with a lot of avenues for evolution.
Anonymousover 9 years agoDidn't bore me! I started sleeping with Mommy 30yrs ago, when Daddy died. I almost Made her love me. I already knew she wanted me, I heard her call my name when she masturbated. This is a pretty good story of seduction, but what was the account of his computer activities about? You should have had her use the internet to gather dirt on her Aunt so she would leave Maddy alone, if the internet really had to be brought into the story. Steve never really had a chance to make a real decision. As almost always happens, she sets her sights and let's him think he is in control as he steers himself right to where she wants him. I don't know about more chapters, but the Aunt is someone introduced into the story, but never developed. Does she become the evil aunt who wants to expose their activities? Or does she try to break them up by attempting to seduce 'Daddy' her own self thereby planting seeds of distrust in Maddy? Is she the good Aunt who recognizes their real love and try to help them? Does Maddy continue to view and emulate 'The Slut' to evolve her new personna? How does he resolve their relationship? That he has simply taken his custodianship to an other level? Does she simply see herself as stepping into mommy's shoes to take care of Daddy? So many ways this could go since you stopped where you did.
