All Comments on 'The Next Step'

by peterpecker

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Loved it!

I'm really enjoying this story. You're a fantastic writer, please keep up the great work.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Terrible and beautiful at the same time

I hate rapists. Violation, along with murder, are the most terrible crimes that can be committed, the guilty deserve no pardon.

In this story, Pierre seems to have changed himself, he has gone from the lustful feelings for Martine to feel authentic love for her.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

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