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Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 14 years ago
Pretty good

This was pretty good, and imaginative, but I noticed one glitch. You referred to Meja as a brunette and later described her as having flaming red hair.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
funny emphasis

It was OK, but it had too much emphasis on the magic used to make Santa and his elves young and sexy, rather than on the sex acts themselves.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
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this was good please make another story

SensualSuzanSensualSuzanover 13 years ago
ho ho ho

A Master's efforts should always be rewarded, especially at Christmas! Santa and his staff... a worthy crew. Maybe a new combination "nicely naughty" list!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot, but too short

Also, within a single paragraph you describe Meja as a brunette and then say she has flaming red hair.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[16.09.22]

Hawt und Fun!

11/10!!!!!

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