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by Lone_Hawk
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luuv2watchuabout 4 years agoEasy to skim and see no character dialogue, which drives me nuts and feel is lazy writing. I need people talking in erotica, expressing how much they're enjoying themselves to bring story alive.
Just me, one mans opinion. :)
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