All Comments on 'The Night before Christmas'

by Hotwife805

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jennyphiljennyphilalmost 7 years ago
Brilliant!

Not our usual genre, but brilliant!

Please continue with your other story...

kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 7 years ago
A good effort worthy of 5 Stars

I loved this. Cleverly written, amusing, to the point, and just horny enough to make it good reading. Thank you. xx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Incredibly fun

This was not only will written it very nicely composed with a mixture of humor description and dialogue. I laughed out loud at the ending. Cleverly written and a great storyline.

Looking for more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
You're a talented author

Hope to read more from you in the future. This was well done. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I can't see the low scores

This was a quality written story with a surprise twist at the end. It checked all my boxes. Well written, very entertaining, interesting characters, humorous, and surprise ending.

This is something I find not very appealing about Literotica. You must really have made an enemy in a short time here because I believe you deserve better. Keep on writing.

patilliepatillieabout 5 years ago
This was really good

The surprise twist, the overall writing quality, you are quite good! Would love to see a continuation of your hotwife series. Cheers.

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