by Hotwife805
Not our usual genre, but brilliant!
Please continue with your other story...
I loved this. Cleverly written, amusing, to the point, and just horny enough to make it good reading. Thank you. xx
This was not only will written it very nicely composed with a mixture of humor description and dialogue. I laughed out loud at the ending. Cleverly written and a great storyline.
Looking for more from you.
Hope to read more from you in the future. This was well done. Thanks for sharing.
This was a quality written story with a surprise twist at the end. It checked all my boxes. Well written, very entertaining, interesting characters, humorous, and surprise ending.
This is something I find not very appealing about Literotica. You must really have made an enemy in a short time here because I believe you deserve better. Keep on writing.
The surprise twist, the overall writing quality, you are quite good! Would love to see a continuation of your hotwife series. Cheers.