by LeCoach
I'm getting tired of every black cock being bigger then any white cock. According to every survey I've seen there is not a lot of difference.
I was enjoying the story and then it took a rather unexpected turn! Very hot.
Story was going good until u brought in the Janitor. Should have deleted that part and had more visits with Billy. Could have been a solid 5
Very hot! All of it. Ivory AND Ebony. I would have rated it a 5 but for the rush to the end on page 2 (Beginning with following Miles into the storeroom) But again a solid effort. Now onto another story by LeCoach.
The story begins and ends with the Nurse and Patient.
That’s how the story should have been. I came here for a sexy story that’s somewhat relatable. Not one where the second half is of a peeping old man is trying to sneak sex into his nightly routine nigga. No one wants to read about a FUCKIN Janitor.
Also the story could have expanded 1 or two more chapters on just the main two characters, the Nurse and Patient. Showing how their sexual and romantic relationship grows into marriage and maybe even the implications of a Nurse/Patient sexual relationship.
An erotic story turns into blackmail and rape, and of course the ol' black man has a monster cock. Such bullshit. Completely unnecessary and frankly disgusting on many levels.
- then she names one of her kids after the filthy rapist?!
Real classy.