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All Comments on 'The Night Of My Firsts'

by joejoejoe1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
"My helmet started to sparkle with ecstasy "

Don't recall that scene in Twilight.

ErotonautErotonautalmost 12 years ago
Excellent debut, Joe

This is nicely paced, with believable characters and dialogue. Look forward to seeing more of your stories in the near future.

joejoejoe1joejoejoe1almost 12 years agoAuthor
"my head sparkled"

haha im always doing this that should have simply been "sparked", not sparkled.

woops....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A+++++ !!!!!!

Absolutely loved it! Yes, there was minor spelling mistakes but not concidering alot on here you have to guess at what they mean. I loved it. Got me off at the end!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

good

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