by TheGenderBender
Instantly dull: tranny boy dresses up for the prom, gets taken by a guy then takes one up his "virgin arse." Now WHO would have EVER thought that?? What a surprise conclusion!
Dont worry about the Anonymous crap, there not brave enuff to write anything or even say who they are.
Good job, a nice short to the point story.
not a bad story, but the ending did seem a bit rushed & i think due to that it felt slightly "canned" to me at least. i didn't have a problem with the plot formula - what's that theory, there are only 7 truely original story ideas? anyway, i would have liked it more if it felt fully developed.
I agree this is an overdone theme. And "Racefan91" as a name is not exactly "saying who you are."
all led up and then wrapped up the sex in one paragraph. story had promise, just disappointed it didn't deliver more.