All Comments on 'The Night of the Cicadas'

Nicely done...welcome to lit

I'm not sure I liked this story, though I can definitely say that I didn't dislike it. Rather, this story sticks in my memory and makes me wonder about what more (background, deeper characterization) was unwritten. Most stories are read, then forgotten (some more quickly than others) with the passage of time. This one continues to resonate, bringing me back to think and reflect. It is a rare quality to produce writing that induces a reader to come back and contemplate. I'd be interested in learning more about the narrator, as well as the painter and his friends (is the gallery owner one of the friends - Julian, perhaps? or is he the owner?) Well done!

This really was the most beautiful erotica story I've ever read. I look forward to watching you writing style mature and grow.