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All Comments on 'The Night Shift'

by AquaticDreams

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Keep it up!

Loved it. Hope to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

It was amazing I cant wait for more.

stormkitestormkiteover 9 years ago
Good start

Couple of places on page 2 where your POV shifted from first to third and back without warning...

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 9 years ago
Just wow.. amazing

More please, that was so hot and suggests much more

nympholovernympholoverover 9 years ago
More Please!

I loved this story! It was so hot. The writing was great and thee details were perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
BEST STORY EVER

This was awesome plz continue writing

kelknightkelknightabout 9 years ago
Finally, a REAL mermaid!

I don't know what it is, but I've been having the damnedest time finding stories where the merfolk don't turn into humans in order to have sex. Congrats on actually writing the mermaid as a mermaid. 10/10 Would read again.

LeeclarkLeeclarkalmost 9 years ago
Woah

This is by far one of my most favorite mermaid/human stories, I can't wait for the next chapter. You should turn it into a series.

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