All Comments on 'The Night That Started it All'

Divorced two times by 27. This immature kid has no idea about women or married life.

For him to be divorced a lot of times is something to be proud of...How said that is...He forgets that his third wife said to him: "the best. I do love you."...But soon she divorced him....All respect she had for him was gone!!! With his 4th wife it will happen the same, unless she stays with him for him to support her while she is free to whore herself around...1*

fuck you in the heart dear annony

You don't LIKE each other? Bells and whistles are going of so you get married?

You're sleeping with your best friend's wife? Did you do that before your divorce?

All kinds of bells and whistles go off for me and they say this is not a well-written story.

Sorry, you lose.

some of us enjoy the story not just the vote and the bitching. Keep writing and really piss him off, maybe he'll die of a heart attack

He's a moron and she's a pig so why not just fuck her as much and kinky as you can than dump her slutty pig ass. He also should not marry if he's not ready to commit to a normal relationship

But more shit than funny. But then Bonnie needs a story or two she can relate to. In this case its just being divorced. The beauty and great kinky sex? Dream on.

I don't think a lot of these Idiots Know how to read. I can't figure out why people keep reading your garbage. I read it cause I like it. Most are lost in porn and they have nothing else to do. I gave you a 5.

unsympathetic characters, timeline problems & more it just goes straight downhill.

An interesting story with some hot sex. After all, isn't that what we are here for? Keep up the good work, better editing would help. Gave you 4 stars.

Sorry this sucked.

Don't pay any mind to the negative comments. If they don't like this kind of story, they shouldn't be reading it.

the dude's 18 and your feeding him booze? Where I'm from that's contributing to the delinquency of a minor. Here in the US drinking age is 21 and has been for some time now. You deserve everything you get.

another cocksucking wimp posting dumb cuck SHIT.

ugly dumb fat cream pie eating fag comments from the asshole of LIT! dear annony!!

I couldn't get past the second paragraph

"Now I was sleeping with her so she thought she would invite Susan for me." Sleeping with who? I'm lost!

"a person who is over weight and can't put that last piece of chocolate cream pie down." pie down WTF? Do you mean can't put down that last piece of chocolate pie?

Another 2*

So bad that I'll probably never go to my favorite restraint again.