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oursecretdesiresoursecretdesiresover 11 years agoAuthor

My husband and I wrote this story together and its our first one. We would really love any comments, suggestions, advice, even criticism to help direct us. So please, please, please leave us some feedback!! Thanks so much!

Not2PervyNot2Pervyabout 1 year ago

I thought it was great and it’s nearly criminal you didn’t get more comments.

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