All Comments on 'The NILF: Neighbor I'd Like to Fuck Ch. 03'

by TexHubby

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Final chapter?

How about at least a brief epilog. I gave it a 5.

TexHubbyTexHubbyalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Epilogue:

Both Tony Sr. and Jr. gave Linda the fucking she so desired. Afterward, she came (pun intended!) clean with her husband. After hours of hot incestuous sex, the three concocted a plan to get back at Robert which would be executed in the Summer, once Tony Jr. came home for an extended period of time. For now they'd play it cool.

The plan called for Tony Jr. to seduce Robert's wife, and make her their play thing. In the inception, Robert would be none-the-wiser; eventually Robert's wife would know why she was used as a pawn, and she'd be all too happy to make Robert pay. Her payoff was getting as much cock as she desired, and to get dicked by Tony, Jr.

Tony Sr. and Linda fell 'back' in love, and they renewed their commitment to each other. They welcomed their son in their bedroom whenever he wished. Tony Sr. understood that his son was the real hero in this story and the key player in him getting his wife back; therefore, he was okay sharing his wife with his son. He actually enjoyed seeing his son and his wife coupling. Linda enjoyed pleasing both her men. Tony Jr. felt like he had the best of both worlds... he truly enjoyed his bedroom time with his parents. His friend Steve knew what happened was a one-time deal, and he kept what happened in his friend's house to himself. His memories would live with him as long as he walked the Earth. Officer Miller and Mario were never heard of again.

Linda was a happy Housewife once more. She learned a lot, and the experience changed her life forever... for the better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I could not vote, for some stupid reason.

That being the case, here's four stars.

Thanks Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Good story - Flat ending

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