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All Comments on 'The Ninth Circle'

by bethanylove

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TLMorganTLMorganalmost 6 years ago

Would like to read more of this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good premise

A good premise, but I wasn't convinced by the dialogue, relationship between Franz and Harriet, and I couldn't connect with any character. With more development this story could work. Don't give up.

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