All Comments on 'The Non-Standard Man Ch. 04'

Your story is well composed, and reads well, too. I can see the bits and pieces of tension appearing, one by one.

It will be interesting to see how you resolve it all.

Thanks for sharing.

I'm reminded a bit of Tannith Lee's Silver Metal Lover, and I mean that as a compliment. It's good to see similar subject matter handled so well and erotically. Please keep writing.

"I'm reminded a bit of Tannith Lee's Silver Metal Lover..."

One can never complain about being favorably compared to Tannith Lee. :)

I appreciate all the comments I've received. And yes, more is coming. Chapter 5 hopefully will post on 10/24 and I written through Chapter 7. It's a daunting pace, but I'm determined to finish before the start of NaNoWriMo. Thanks!

Fun, sexy and romantic all packaged in an intriguing world setting...

Whats not to like?!?

Oh, and my wife does NaNoWriMo as well! I lose her for a while as she writes like a maniac and then I get to read what she's accomplished while pampering her over the ordeal. Lots of fun in an insane kinda way.

Thank you for sharing your writing. It's been a pleasure to read!

Btw, I don’t know how much crossover with Altered Genesis you are planning but it would be cool if Eleanor or Priya attended the event at the Senator’s country house ... or even Dean though that would be a stretch...