by MissPrim
...as usual!
Nuff said.
Oh, and I want her boss to pay. Big time. Really big time.
Did I mention, brilliant?!?
Brilliant.
I was try to tap the 5 this story deserves. You keep writing, and I promise to be more careful.
Not a problem.
I have two full chapters written, and a third incomplete one, so yes, there will be more. I just have to do the editing on the next chapter, and I'll submit it. So look in the next two or three days for the next chapter!
Thanks for reading!
You have no idea how happy I am to see a new chapter and with Andrew back as well. This is just what I needed! I am a huge fan of this story and I can't wait to see the development between Evaline and Andrew. 5 stars.
I thought chunks of skin were torn from his hands digging out?
No mention of the bare metal on her nipples.
This story is sooooo good!!!!1!! I don't think I can express how good!It's better than several published erotic romances I've read. Thank you for writing it, and keep the chapters coming!
Loving your work!
Can't wait to read what you've got planned for Evie and Andrew... (there is more...?)
I submitted Chapter 10 today, so now it's in the moderator's hands.
Thank you for reading!
You have an interesting plot, but this chapter... WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR GRAMMAR AND SPELLING?! You had errors before but this chapter was just...please re-post it. And take a little more time editing- this chapter showed that you rushed. I know it's fun to share your story with readers but people can wait a day to get decent grammar.
I welcome helpful critique and I'm always learning. If there is something you feel is in error, please send me a PM. It is more helpful to have specifics, so I can learn from my mistakes.
I am always happy to speak to my readers.
Thanks for reading.