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Click here"Oh, fuck," I said.
A hand reached my nipple again, pinched it and released, and pinched again, over and over. My back arched, and I whimpered again.
"Sweet Evaline," he whispered. With that he plunged in, and fucked me wildly as if he couldn't stop himself. Each stroke he hammered into me drove my pleasure higher as my pussy clenched around his shaft. My hips thrust in time with his strokes while the rush of the gathering force of my ecstasy hammered through my blood. Fire burst and blazed as my hips bucked against his cock, sending shock waves through my body.
"Andrew!"
"Evaline!"
His body shuddered as he slowed his thrusts. My hips and his thrusts stilled but he held himself there, looking in my eyes.
"I never want to be apart from you again."
- COMMENTS
MissPrimover 9 years agoAuthorI welcome helpful critique and I'm always learning. If there is something you feel is in error, please send me a PM. It is more helpful to have specifics, so I can learn from my mistakes.
I am always happy to speak to my readers.
Thanks for reading.
Anonymousover 9 years agoYou have an interesting plot, but this chapter... WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR GRAMMAR AND SPELLING?! You had errors before but this chapter was just...please re-post it. And take a little more time editing- this chapter showed that you rushed. I know it's fun to share your story with readers but people can wait a day to get decent grammar.
MissPrimover 9 years agoAuthorI submitted Chapter 10 today, so now it's in the moderator's hands.
Thank you for reading!
Anonymousover 9 years agoLoving your work!
Can't wait to read what you've got planned for Evie and Andrew... (there is more...?)
