by Voboy
Really well done. She is such a great character! Funny, irreverent and obviously ballsy. No pun intended. Good work.
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Kids were nodding politely at me as (they) got ready to go, and I responded in kind; they were good kids, most of them
Well written and sexy as hell! Love the humor that you gave Shannon who I would love to see some more of her....good job!
I'd love to read about Trevor's sex life. I think you could write a hot story about an arrogant HS football stud!
Hilarious and hot! Great combination! I thoroughly enjoyed the characters you created. Thank you for sharing.
You keep racking up the fives...
I want Shannon for breakfast, lunch, and dinner!
Tell Shannon a Norwegian wants to get cheesy with her? :+)))
Nasty and beautifully written. I hope we will read more about Shannon, Gina & co.
5/5
I've read a lot of dirty stories, but I can't recall any with the initial act between the protagonists being a rimjob, especially on a sweaty runner. Kudos to the author for making it believable. This is high level writing: first person narrative, female POV, male author (or so he/she says)--just damn fine work.