All Comments on 'The Not So Private, Private Cavern 02'

Nicely written, great story-telling! Sexy and fun-loving, not crude. Awaiting more of the same. Please!

next chapter please ASAP

next time he shouldn't pull out!!!

Really enjoyed this story. Looking forward to more chapters

Very Nice. Pity about Andrea being so small on top ---24B. Ha! Ha!

Nicely written.

Thanks

Len

I like the setting. I can't remember reading any story that took place in a cave.

I understand Tim being on the hill side near the cave and hearing Andrea because he was scouting a place to hunt. However I was a bit confused how or why Sally happened to be on that hill near the cave. Did she follow Tim when he let the house? It seemed strange to have her out walking and she just stumbled on the cave and heard Tim and Andrea.

I really liked the story and that was my only question. Thanks for sharing and I hope to to read more of this adventure.

BTW, I gave you 5 stars for the originality of your story.

RecHiker

But I find it hard to believe that cum would hit his chin. Maybe hers. Thats happened to me when a guy pulls out...

Please write the next chapter this story was do well written I read your other post please finish the ones you have started love your writing but want the rest of the story thanks for writing

Chapter 3 will be out when? Love it gr8 story. Moree plzzzzzzzz

Very hot story<3

I was hoping for him to ravish Andrea first he was a virgin she was one and his sister wasn't