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All Comments on 'The Not-So-Reluctant Samaritan'

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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 6 years ago
Good Start

A good set-up. I think you had a good balance between story-telling and world-building. I think it would have been hotter with more reluctance, but as a one-scene vignette, it's pretty good.

flying_sheepflying_sheepalmost 6 years ago
Ok

Nice story but it you're right: It could've been better with more editing. It just feels a bit bumpy to me.

Also: Please continue "The Meet". I've been checking your page almost daily for the last couple of weeks hoping to find a new chapter.

Greetings, G

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