All Comments on 'The Not So Sweet Date'

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chargergirlchargergirlalmost 16 years ago
Oh {{{seth}}}!!

That was wonderful!!! Thank you for writing this for me. It was just what I wanted. Sweet and gentle, yet forceful and with a touch of humor. Loved it, babe. *kisses*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great Fuckin Story!!!!

Great Story Sethp! Keep up the good work!

Plainly_JanePlainly_Janealmost 16 years ago
I'm so gonna kill you Sethie!

Just you wait and see -- when you least expect it, I'm gonna wreak havoc on ya! Idjit - I've got a thing for men's asses! LOL<br><br>

I knew Cgirl was in trouble when I read this: "She had never been in the presence of someone so commanding and strong." Then I knew she was in real trouble when I read this: "There was an aggression in his demeanor that scared her a little bit and he was moving faster then she had hoped he would. She didn't want to appear to be a slut to him but wasn't sure that she could refuse his advances."<br><br>

If I was talking to you, I'd say "Great story Seth!" ;)

MollyDollyMollyDollyalmost 16 years ago
Sounds like a pretty hot date!

What an interesting first date! Unforgettable to say the least! What a lucky girl, that Cgirl ;)

MD

meg1meg1almost 16 years ago
I always liked the story

and I knew Charger would too. Keep writing sweet stories like this, and we'll keep giving your inspiration.

janiexxjaniexxalmost 16 years ago
Great story...great writing!

It's been a while since I read your stories and I have to say that I really enjoyed this one! A very well-written tale that certainly did it for me!

janiexx

KonyhaKonyhaabout 14 years ago
Maybe not a sweet date but...

You sure know how to show a girl a good time. This is one of the few stories I wish I could trade places with one of the characters. Well crafted and arousing as usual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
how vain

All throughout you have been praising your Self

Vain. Self centred.

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