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Click here"A week is a long time with someone you don't really want to be with." Tom said. "Well, when would you want to see me?"
"He has some business thing tomorrow night." She said. "I'll have a few hours to myself."
"I have some women coming to my house tomorrow night." Tom said thinking. "If you decide to come then I'll e-mail you some instructions. Do you think you can follow instructions? Like a submissive?"
Angie began to cheer up. "I don't know! I'd like to try! It's sounds so exciting."
"Then I'll e-mail you instructions." Tom said. "Follow them exactly." Then he paused. "Angie?"
"Yes?"
"I want you to know that, no matter what happens, I really like you. I really enjoyed our time together. I know it's not something you normally do. I guess I feel honored that you felt comfortable trusting me."
"That's so sweet!"
"Whatever happens... whatever you see... I want you to remember that... if at some point you think I'm a bad person, I want you to think about this conversation... I would never want to hurt you."
It sounded a bit ominous. Angie thought that he was just afraid she'd be skittish. Her excitement and naivety didn't allow her to contemplate any bad intentions. The coincidence of everything was just that -- a coincidence.
"I guess I'll see you soon." He said.
"I hope so!" She chirped.
Tom could hear the enthusiasm in her voice as he hung up. He tried to think of anything else that could come up to throw him off his guard. He just found out he was going to be a father yesterday. His aunt had shown up early. It was getting very hard to control. It was a challenge though. He knew this would all be complicated when it first began a few days ago. He couldn't back down now.
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- COMMENTS
Dirtymindedman64over 2 years agoThis is to all the grammar critics, give the writer a break. It's not like you paid for the story.
TheGreyWolf81over 2 years agoTom is a man with a very-very complicated life, indeed. One I foresee is about to become a whole lot more complicated...
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI think it is so great how you used the experience of Kimmie in Stephens store to educate the audience about the difference between Dom/sub and abuse. I normally come for the entertainment and eroticism and ended up learning something
AmorousFuckeralmost 4 years agoThe few grammatical errors bother me. Really nothing a good editor wouldn't fix pretty easily, and the story as a whole is going well. Maybe a little too easy to see how everything is aligning itself, but I'm still enjoying it.
Decal_lastalmost 6 years agoYep! this just keeps getting better and better. Love every twist and turn.
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cudsnuggleatabout 6 years agoFrom Dave,
teamhumanity@live.com
To Sir With LOVE
HOLY SHIT
It was a look of adoration. His cock . . .
Boxcarbillover 6 years agoIt just gets better and better as it moves along. Thinking ahead to what could happen.
Frognutalmost 8 years agoThis is getting really rich!
Tom is going to take dear old dad on a trip ,LoL.
Headguyabout 11 years agoWell, in truth it's no surprise: the story and the characters are presented so masterfully (sort of Literotica's Downton Abbey), it doesn't matter that it isn't as erotic as a) earlier installments were or b) some other stories. Keep up the good work!
LordSlamdawggabout 11 years agoMy one quibble is the characters & plot have taken over in this chapter. I'm the beginning there were lush descriptions of the settings and ornate accoutrements of the story's locations. This tale is so intense that it gave the reader a chance to catch a literary breath & brace self for the next fresh,fascinating outrage.
Outside of that, I'm hooked on story & impatiently wait for next installment. Fantasy put to stern test seems to be a winning formula. Many thx to Nicequip for hard work thus far & hopefully more to come.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoCongratulations on a very fine story. I do hope it will continue for a few more chapters.
Many thanks for the excellent read.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoWhat a wonderful discovery this has been. Please stay the course and finish. Its always a disappointment when terrific stories don't get finished.
Nicequipabout 11 years agoAuthorI've just finished writing Part 6. I need to proof it and then submit it. Thanks for your patience and support. I've really enjoyed all the feedback and encouragement. Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions, concerns or input. Warmest regards.
JPBVabout 11 years agoAs one with some experience in D&S, I find the explanations of the lifestyle quite well done, I especially liked the defense of a young woman being abused -- however, I'm anxiously waiting to find out how he socks it to the dad! After all the build-up, it needs to be monumental.
