All Comments on 'The Novice'

Very enjoyable Crux story. Not sure about leaving the feet free as it detracts from the true experience and duration for both the victim and observers.

Crux stories turn me on and this was no exception. Though I have never “been there; done that” I felt myself up on the cross with her. The pain she was in, her dance, her feet slipping on the angled footrest brought me there more than once. I also loved the ending as it left me wondering, what else is going to happen to her over the next week. Lovely little story.

I liked this story as a whole. It advances at a good rhythm, no needless repetitions. I like also the detached way the girl talks about her sex life.

Although I initially thought the guy would deserve to be taught a good lesson, when it went the other way this was felt as a deception by me the reader in the same way the girl must have felt it.

Am now waiting for the follow-up where she will obey the master.