- BDSM
- The Novice
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"Let me down..." I heard someone say. The novice. He had finally broken. I had won.
But the voice wasn't right.
"Please... take me down..."
The voice was a woman's.
It was mine. I was pleading to be cut down.
There was no shame, just acceptance. I was done. My reserves gone, exhausted.
As I was taken down from the cross, limp and unable to move, I caught a glimpse of the novice. He was also being taken down. His body lolled loosely in the strong arms that pulled him off the cross. As they lay us both on the ground, I took long gasping breaths, and then drank some water that was offered.
The novice lay motionless beside me, his find body glistening a sunburned red in the sunset light.
"Obeisance," he rasped.
I knew what was happening. It had been agreed. I would live up to the agreement.
With great effort I crawled over to him, knelt and kissed his naked feet.
"Master," I said. "Command me. I am yours."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month agoI liked this story as a whole. It advances at a good rhythm, no needless repetitions. I like also the detached way the girl talks about her sex life.
Although I initially thought the guy would deserve to be taught a good lesson, when it went the other way this was felt as a deception by me the reader in the same way the girl must have felt it.
Am now waiting for the follow-up where she will obey the master.
toastywarm01about 2 months agoCrux stories turn me on and this was no exception. Though I have never “been there; done that” I felt myself up on the cross with her. The pain she was in, her dance, her feet slipping on the angled footrest brought me there more than once. I also loved the ending as it left me wondering, what else is going to happen to her over the next week. Lovely little story.
Horseman68over 5 years agoVery enjoyable Crux story. Not sure about leaving the feet free as it detracts from the true experience and duration for both the victim and observers.
