All Comments on 'The Novice Ch. 04'

This chapter doesn't further the plot as much as I would have hoped, but it serves SO well as a VERY hot love scene! I'm very glad you're back & definitely hope to see more of your writing soon! Keep up the wonderful writing! :)

And how you made us wait, over 2 years! But every word worth waiting for, a brilliant story.

Yey, you're back! I thought you had given up on your writing, but I'm glad I was wrong. Your stories are filled with such passion, they could easily compete with the romance novels you see in book stores.

And what a cliffhanger for this chapter! I'm curious to see how exactly Lukas plans to save Audrey from his brother. Please don't make us wait too long for the next update!

I'm so glad you're back! I absolutely love your stories! You're a great writer and this is a wonderful story! (Although I still wish Lukas had been the one to take Audrey's virginity)

Great way to continue. Please don't make us wait so long for the next one...this story is too good for you to be torturing us that way. ;o)

I didn't think it was possible to redeem this story after Father Mathew raped her, but you did it! This story is pure genius! I love it so. It is simply the best. I can't wait for the next chapter (but I hope Father Mathew plays a smaller role. I absolutely hate that character.)

Thank you for continuing this story. Like all of your stories, this one is a favorite.

I'm so happy you've submitted something new. You are one of my favourite authors. Thanks for writing!

This is a great addition to your stories. Thanx for once more sharing with this community.

can't wait until the next installment

Another amazing instalment! Have you ever been published?

Thank you for continuing your story. You are one of my favorite writers on this site and I'm glad you are still here.

I've been waiting so long for something new. You are an amazing writer and someone I always check on for new things everytime I log on.

Thank you for this amazing sizzling romance. Wonderful story and I can't wait to see what happens to both Audrey and Lukas. Please continue

This story is absolutely wonderful. Please, please give us more. It's hot, suspenseful, and the tender moments between Audrey and Lukas are incredibly heartwarming. Please give us a happy ending!

i love this story so sexy and erotic please finish it

You have great writing skills. I love your stories!

Please continue this story.

This is amazing! Write more and soon! im dying to know how it all ends!!!

This is actually one of the best stories I've read in a long time - everything about it is amazing! Please please write a final version, Audrey and Lucas have to end up together (dreadful romantic coming out here!).

the intense moments between father and audrey are really good. so controlling and manipulating.

but then the soft moments between audrey and lukas really make it sexy!

please keep writing!

This is such a great story! I die for a new chapter and I really hope that you haven't abandoned it! Thank you so much for sharing it with us readers!

please write another... this story is amazing... please continue it =]

please please please write another chapter! byfar the best story i've ever read!

What a perfect balance between getting swept away by prince charming, saved by the evil brother. Just enough sexual content to make you squirm a bit, but not overdone so as to leave nothing to the imagination. This has got to be in the top 5 "erotic" stories I have read. Beautifully written.

A classic erotic story.

please, please continue. I LOVE this and all your other stories and can't wait for them to continue.

Your style sweeps me away. Loved it

More please.

So good :)

Thennnnnnn?????????????????? plzz tell me

& other then that u r a wonderfull writer love u muahhhhhhhhh

Will there be a confrotation between brothers?!

All ur stories r wonderful

come on plzzzzz tell us what happens next??

Please please continue with the story!

You have me panting and breathless--the story must go on!

This cannot seriously be the last chapter available ... I have to have more of this story ... I have been enjoying this site for nearly a year now and this is ABSOLUTELY ONE OF THE BEST ... please don't leave us waiting too long

Finish. This.

this series is excellent as is much of your other work. Superb

PLease hurry and continue this! Good job ending with a cliffhanger, it just makes us want to keep reading even more!

I would love to read more of this. LOVE IT!

most amazing ever!! pleaase please please finish this, its the best one ive found on this site!!

Seriously good! Please hurry up and finish the next one! I am dying to find out what happens next! Xxx

Finish the next one!!!!!

This story was wonderful ... i like everyone else that you caught the attention of would love to see how things plays out from here ... Thank you for writing it so well with all the small twist and turns in it

Please please please please please tell us more. And until you do, I'm off to imagine Audrey and Lukas's future together ...

We need more. Please finish this story, and soon.

Please continue this storyline. It is captivating and my entire body is on fire wanting more.

for you to finish this story.

please continue the story!!!!!! this by far is my favorite story here...what will happen next? Please keep Lukas and Audrey together!

I really hope that you finish this story! It's been one of my favorites and I really do not want the story to end here.

finish this story!!!! Pretty, pretty please!! This has been a great story so far, so please finish it!!!

CHAPTER 5, we all gotta have it.

you totally have to finish this!!

When are you going to finish this?

Why leave this and so many of your other stories unfinished. This was just starting to get really good. Please finish these stories I know its been several years but please finish them I really enjoyed reading your stories till the end where you leave everyone hanging.

You are here by requested to continue at the request for your dedicated readers.

Thank you

Where's the rest?? Please finish this story, you are one of the best writers on this site and it's sad that this much-read and widely appreciated story remains unfinished.

Please may we have some more? Well written erotica is extremely hard to come by and in my book, you're right up there with our beloved Dr. Mabeuse!

I am a huge fan, and I think 59 comments is a good sign you need to continue. I know what it is like to hit a road block in writing, but hopefully it will pass soon! Thanks for the exhilarating thus far.

For the sake of your MANY MANY fans, PLEASE continue this story.

I'm dying of curiosity about what happens between Audrey and Lukas! You have to bring this story to an end.

Very passionate and I love the relationship between Aubrey and Lucas a whole lot more than I do with Aubrey and Louis. It's nice to see the difference though in how each of the brothers try to "possess" Aubrey. Also, I feel that you should continue whenever possible! This has been very exciting and I'm a major fan of your writing!

Please more of her awakening! I would love to see another interaction between Audrey and Mother Superior...and perhaps Beth as well.

I need more! I want to know what happens with Audrey and Lukas! Please?!

Your talent of seduction through your writing is powerful, and it is cruel to not give this tale a befitting end.

Why have you not published this?????? Or have you and I've missed it somewhere like BookStrand or Silver Publishing or Dreamspinner Press????? Please, please finish as soon as possible!!!!!!!!

OMG You must finish this, it's brilliant!!

I ran across this story earlier this evening and have read through all of it in one sitting!

wow this is an amazing amazing story! I need more, it's gotten me so wet and needy, please write more!

I couldn't sleep until I had finished it. Stayed up til 4:30! Can't wait for more!

OH MY GRACIOUS! WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER? MY WELL-BEING HANGS ON CHAPTER 5

Tooooo much of a cliff hanger but awesome and sexy. Both brothers seem yummy, I would not mind being under father Matthews instruction!

Please, I need chapter 5. I need it.

Where is chapter 5? I need it! NEED IT!!!

I am loving this story.I have to know what happens now! PLEASE keep writing!!

Please give us chapters 5, 6, 7,..... this is great! And I am soon rooting for Lukas!

More. Much more.

Is part of the story missing! How could it just end like that?!?

Fantastic story! Great characters, development, and super hot love scenes. I NEED to know what happens in the end to Audrey and Lukas and Beth. Please please please write more!

Surely, you wouldn't end the story now?? For shit sakes! Don't leave us with this story bringing us to a raging woodie, then left hanging like this, with no place left to go with it! This is great writing so far!

We have to find out what happens to Audrey, how her life works-out! What about Beth's life? Will Lukas give Lecherous Mother Superior and Father Matthews their proper comeuppance?

I so hope we get to read about a one-sided free-for-all between those two brothers, where Lukas keeps the upper-hand and beats shit outta his miserable wretch of a brother, Father Matthews, and does so, John Wayne style! That'd be FUN! :)

Regardless how you choose to end this story, it isn't anywhere near finished YET!!

You just can't stop it now! This story is too good! A rock-solid double gainer boner or twat-diddler! :)

Your writing is excellent!

Thank you for the great story, just finish it and don't leave us in suspense too long as you finish and post the last chapters here? We just gotta know how this story ends!!

Thanks!

are you fucking kidding me.....you write a story that with each chapter gives me an impossibly harder wood and then you dont write the fucking ending of it?

Please write more!

Wow!!!! Really, people! Great story, I hope it's not the ending, I really want Audrey to find herself and her love. And the comfrantetion between the two brothers!! Love your stories!!!

I love it.

"Then from behind Mother appeared Beth." That ALL? Oh please good cardinal, please ... give us moooreee!!! We want the rest of the manuscript!

This is so intense! I am on the edge of my sofa begging the to leave and they lay there to only get caught!!! Thank you for the rollercoaster ride!!! Well done. I can't wait to read the rest... Patiently waiting while I crew down my nails.

Yes , it was one of the best that i have read, and the writing was tasteful, great writing, lovely story line ,not a moment dull.

some of it may be true.Live near a monastery, and have heard tale like these from the people who are employed there. Not to say anything about the blue movies that a watched, by these priest in training.Will there be more.?

please continue!!!!

More please!!!!!

You've left me searching frantically for chapter 5. So unkind....

Please continue!! I've downed 3 cups of coffee frantically reading this story! Hope to see chapter 5 soon!

Please finish.

I am waiting on pins and needles! Please finish!

Im not waiting for chapter 5... But a new series along the same line of how priests abused women's religosity around that time....perhaps fast forward to the recent sex scandals still involving the Church? Hahaha...

Will there be more chapters? If so when can we expect them.

Paying attention to the dates this author's stories were posted, it seems the author no longer publishes works under this membership.

Please please please come back and continue this series!

I loved the story and the ultimate happy ending. I hope there are more in the near future. Seems I am not he only one who really liked it. More please.

Please continue, I'm loving your characters

Like so many others who've read this and left comments here, I certainly hope you write an ending to this excellently written story!

What happens to Audry and Beth? Does Lukas defend Audry to Mother Superior and when she tries to force Audry to go back to the convent, does Lukas step in and stop her?

Will the brothers Lukas and the convent father, lock horns and do battle?

However you choose to finish out this story, please do, so that we know how these main characters lives end-out, by story's end, no matter how many chapters that takes you!

This is one of my most fav story's on this web-site! Its excellent and great writing skills!

Thank you!