All Comments on 'The Noxahngeli Existence Ch. 01'
by SinSxPerfection
- 8 Comments
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoContinue this please, it sounds like a wonderful story and is very well writen so far.
The only thing lacking was her sense of confusion, fear, panic in waking up in a strange world.She seemed to recover to quickly.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
angelicbeautyalmost 11 years agoGood story I like the way its begun. I so agree that her being calm after waking up in a new place is odd...but still good. Please write more
SinSxPerfectionalmost 11 years agoAuthorHopefully I can get the next chapter out in the next week or two. I'm actually on vacation right now, soooo we all know what vacation means. ^_^ But hopefully on my down time out here I'll have time to write a bit. Thanks again everyone.
-J
RAPiDDalmost 11 years agoAwesome to see your story on here :) Can't wait for the second chapter!
angeldustjaalmost 11 years agoLoved it even without the sex u held my attention. I only hope that Chap 2 will be longer than 1 page
