All Comments on 'The "Odd Job" Girl'

but then I could identify with the man. Nice story!

Unfortunately I wasn't a teacher.

I wonder if a class for female auto-mechanics at the local community college would work?...

Great story - thanks.

it would have been a much "hotter" story.

Best story I've ever read on Literotica!!

Yes, there's a place for lightweight stroke stories, but this barely weighed enough to keep it from floating off the screen. Middle aged male fantasy with vacuous characters, an uncreative plot, totally unbelievable teenage female character (yeah, there's a lot of 18yo girls who want to suck and fuck 65 yo guys, and hope the old guy will want to be their temporary fill-in boyfriend), and the sex segments were barely tepid. I didn't look very closely but I think the punctuation was pretty good though. I guess this could be categorized as "coffee break porn," or a "10 minute stroke story," and if it should be the latter, be prepared to work that hand overtime. I googled natalie whatshername, and thought she had an interesting face/body, although maybe I don't watch enough TV because I couldn't place her in any movie or show, which reminds me-- I know this is personal taste, but I don't like it when authors have to rely on naming celebrities to let the reader know what a character looks like.

Personal preference on my part, but I'd have really liked the "bad girl/spanking" reference fleshed out as a transition to taking her to the bed.

A short story, yet developed enough to have a real plot.

Creative imagination showed in the plot and characters. Plus I like teacher-student stories. Especially respectful ones where both like it/benefit.

Unlike a previous comment, spanking (or anal) would not improve it, but the opposite.

Paul in Oklahoma

Thanks for sharing.