by daddysinner
You need some spell checking and grammar checking. Did you even proof read this? I bet not otherwise you would have caught your writing errors. I lost interest after so many errors.
It's hard to read a story that sounds like pure gibberish.
Just curious, did you read it before you published it.
[quote]Stuff laughed and shoved John into a chair[/quote]
I assume "Stuff" was meant to be Stuart.