All Comments on 'The Office Party'

by daddysinner

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kafkafabout 6 years ago
Garbage

Stuff laughed? WTF?

Rape isn't erotic. You are on the wrong website.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

You need some spell checking and grammar checking. Did you even proof read this? I bet not otherwise you would have caught your writing errors. I lost interest after so many errors.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
boring

boring

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
quality control

It's hard to read a story that sounds like pure gibberish.

Just curious, did you read it before you published it.

[quote]Stuff laughed and shoved John into a chair[/quote]

I assume "Stuff" was meant to be Stuart.

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