All Comments on 'The Ogre in the Woods'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
different

Not bad but gets a bit off centered in the dialogue between story and inner from the end of the first page into second.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 13 years ago
You are pretty good at relaxing that girl, aren't you.

Another good one.

Keep it up.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12about 13 years ago
Love those bedtime stories!*****

Makes me want to hit the bed right now!

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