All Comments on 'The Old King and the New Bride Ch. 02'

I've read all your stories and I love Lucifer! I'm so happy he's FINALLY found a woman for himself and i'm so excited for the chapters to be put up. This is great :) unload your stories on me any day, you are amazing and I am hooked!!!!

If you have read For the Love of Evil, by Piers Anthony, this is a fun twist on Lucifer/Satan. I definitely am awaiting the next chapter.

Perfect, can't wait for the next. Oh, and best wishes in college.

omg! just keep writing...er...typing...i cant wait!

It's different to think of Lucifer as emotionally needy! Love the story, keep up the good work!

So you have three possible bad guys: her mom, the rude guy & leyna.

Can't wait to read your next chapter.

also....will she remain human and so fragile the whole time she is there? how does she not age? things I"d like to know.

I'm sorry but it's just too unrealistic that a virgin will be wanting to be rammed hard by a huge dick with barely any or 0 foreplay! Either he doesn't know where her clit is or doesn't care. He's ridden her 3 times and hasn't even touched it. Your sex scenes go from 0 to 100 in the blink of an eye. She would need medical attention by now if this were real. All your previous men were such considerate lovers ensuring their women were thoroughly prepared, often being given an orgasm, before penetration. It seems like either someone else wrote the bedroom scenes or Lucifer is one of the most selfish lovers ever. Certainly nothing for her to be craving and raving about.

The best story.