All Comments on 'The Old Pals Act'

But that was even more vile then I'd have thought possible. At least it was a bit different as most of your stories were becoming basically the same.Ever since your story where the husband beat the guy to death with a rock it's been one long downhill slide into your humiliation fantasys. The Antartica story was the only one that came even close to resembling the reality of such relationships. What's really disappointing is that as a writer ... You get better and better. It's a shame your narratives are getting worse and worse.

Seriously, your stories just get sicker

and yet you read it. So I gave it a 5 knowing you would give it a 1!!! Hope this offset your dead brain ass hole way of life

stories get longer, now i don't read them because i know you are not that bright and you make me sick but really making them longer my suggestion to you would be stay away from computers and pens,pencils and paper and give people a break because you do appeal to certain people but not anyone with a brain just some very sick fucks.

Interesting ukresearcher has not reach the 2.0........cuck story lovers to push the 5*****.

Dear bonnie. Didn't have to read it to know it's trash. Did you really think anything this writer puts out is worth reading? Your score is worthless and meaningless as always. You are the definition of a "troll". Enjoy your new status. Nothing erotic about willing cuckolds and gay males. No score. (ML)

I suggest you try to stretch yourself as a writer and write a cuck story in which the poor hubby redeems and revenges himself.

Your stories get low ratings ALL the time. Perhaps you could learn something from that? Such as people don't enjoy your work? Maybe adjust your "style" (if that's what you call it). Because at this point your stories aren't worth the time spent reading them. Once again - no stars for absolutely poorly written drivel.

he writes stories and you know what they are about , and yet you read then all and then bitch. I think you really are fucking crazy dear annony!!! Gave it a 5

when the fetish card has been played. TK U MLJ LV NV

Loved this story, all the way through :)

Thanks for writing.

i gave it 5 out of 5

I admired the development of the selective escalation of Brad's brass and charisma. He ripped off the previous pretense and decapitated the self deception of the story's couple. They know each other and they know who they really are now. For better or worse. Full marks . *****

What a waste.Pope had it right.Your stories have seemed to spiral off the rails with each effort.Sad really.Hard.ro read.

6 pages is far too long to take a chance.

When you say gay male, I KNEW not to even bother.....

Again, thanks for the warning.

Warnings DO help to keep the comments section from becoming a battleground.

No vote but very appreciative of the warning, so thanks!

I hope you find your audience, but since GAY is GAY is GAY, really think about putting it there next time.

You write to a formula. A whining self-pitying husband, a strangely detached wife whose sole function is to fuck and a callous lover full of ludicrous rationalisations. Why would I be interested in such people? I only read about 10% of any given story to see if anything has changed so it would be unfair to rate them.

I can only assume you write for yourself rather than for us, but I have commented anyway.

No further comment necessary

Bonnietaylor1 got locked out once. Be careful, bonnietaylor2 may get locked out too. Trolls are not appreciated, especially non-anonymous ones. Being vindictive on a porn site is ridiculous. No comment on story. This author writes well but his themes leave a lot to be desired. Didn't read this story. Hoping, someday, he'll write something erotic. Not holding my breath. No score. Moving on.

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You are stuck on the wimp hubby-detached wife-illogical stud formula. Too bad really. You waste your skill.

Well developed, coherent and thouroughly enjoyable. Thank you!

....stomach ache..and my ass was burning.

Three months later, we were both diagnosed with seversl different venereal diseases.

She died groaning in pain a year and a half later her womb a foetid mess, and I write this as I lay dying of AIDS.

Fucking Brad destroyed us both. And when I called him, he just laughed.

A bit long for my taste. I would have broken it up into smaller sections like most of the writers do. That being said, I thought the story line and development were ok. You seemed to capture the characters emotions fairly well. Warning this could be put in gay male category was a good tip off to the amount of bi-sexuality. Strictly gay male is not my fetish, but bi-sexual is ok. In this case, the quantity of gay/bi-sexuality was a bit much in my opinion. I did enjoy the cuckold theme. Overall I would give it a 3.

Gay section asshole

To long, too gay, too ukresarcher for.human consumption.