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Deep SoakerDeep Soakerabout 9 years ago
Good start and then PE

The story had a good start and setup, but then got into sex too quickly. A man resolved to remain a virgin would not yield so quickly. The story would have been more credible if she had taken smaller steps with him not comfortable saying no to any particular step as it would seem petty to complain and reject. Perhaps she could start by sitting closer to each other, touching in non-erogenous places, crying so that she could be held and comforted, etc. This story was similar to premature ejaculation. Things were all over while I was still getting warmed up and ready for more.

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