All Comments on 'The One Called Mercy Ch. 02'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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willyeddy2001willyeddy2001about 11 years ago
great story

this is a great story i hope there is more to come

MistressTrinityJonesMistressTrinityJonesabout 11 years ago
Still going strong!

I like the way you're positioning her as the one who really wields the power. I can see her reshaping her world such that she really does start to call the shots. She seems to have that strength of character.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

So is she going to keep rolling down the masochist's hill until she rolls off a cliff to her death? That seems to be the only definition of 'enough.' I believe I am done here. I'm sure many others will continue to enjoy this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I thought it was a week she was staying not permanent

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