All Comments on 'The One That Got Away'

Lovely story. It's so rare to see a interracial story written by a white man. Thank you.

Im interested n what happens next!

Five.

More please

You need to update this, I want to know what happened as well. Did she get cold feet, is she married or a con artist what?!

What an asshole! Your comment needs to be deleted ASAP jerk!

To the Bitch tht wrote that last Anonymous comment, you may be a nigger whore or whatever but I'm a perfectly fine black woman. Don't start shit with other people. What others like is none of your concern.

The description of her didn't make it seem as if she were black. I mean "long brunette hair"-"not black but dark brown" or especially " skin the color of butter"...I mean is that yellow or? Whatever the hell color butter is it's definitely not any shade of brown. So I was lost on that part and I didn't search for a bwwm book with a black girl who could just as well be mexican. Sorry

I am not tripping on Leoni's skin tone, but WTF? What made her vamp like that? Must have been the I LOVE YOU part that freaked her out. You need to write an update to this story! FOR REAL!

I feel just as heartbroken as if I had been the one to go through this myself. I do not know if the person who wrote actually had this happen to them but their pain is felt by all faithful men around this world. Regardless of race, circumstance, or relationship status