All Comments on 'The One that Got Away Ch. 02'

You only get 3* for the actual writing, get an editor. That said your words and plot were 5* easily. And that's why I read things. Made me think of my high school reunions. Blew the first by being smashed, but the next I behaved and didn't have the wife with me. Enjoyed "spending time" with my old HS girlfriend. Things were so much better than when we were young and not very knowledgeable. Even now, more than 50yrs since graduation, there is a special place in my heart for her. I would love to see her, hold her and share a kiss.

too rushed hated the ending

it is disappoints when most men downgrade pussy and reject it for an ass

she waited 25 yrs to lose her virginity with him but he being the egoistic man went again for her ass and rejected her pussy

had she not pointed that he should take hrt virginity too he might have again took her ass and threw her out of his room

he ll fuck abbys pussy himself but not hers since he too feels that she is a ratface

since she is used to anal

he didnt botherveven lube his cock before entering her ass not even for her sake

and it ended with no conclusion she clearly told him she loves him but he didnt even clarified if she was just a one n8 stand or anal fuckbuddy for him or the potential love of his life

didnt stood for her when sally or abby were bitching about her

although his wink while that other franky or whatever she was looked at them so yeah a small token of gesture for her sake

story stinks of rushed misogynitic vibes

3 stars