All Comments on 'The One That Made and Broke Me'

Hot Hot Hot......Just what a woman wants.....big balls and an even bigger cock.......=)

Oh yeah, a big cock and no brains. Pathetic excuse for a story

You know, you don't write half-bad fuck stories. I got one of those, by the way. Its big. Real big. A big, ugly, evil looking thing. Would be sort of nice to introduce you to it. But the thing is... it would have to be all your holes or nothing.

although I look forward to the narrator engaging in self pleasure and sharing that with the listener. To me,, thats what makes it hot--hearing someone getting off. I dont think reading a story can impart anywhere near the same level of arousal.

Hiya. Liked this audio. The big cock slut theme is a fun one and one that isn't touched much in audios and the story is fun. You also have a nice voice.

I will say that there is room for improvement in your presentation. You sound really read-ee (Like you're reading). Perhaps practice sounding more conversational, like you're telling your best friend about your experience rather than reading a book out loud, it'll improve the quality of your work immensely. Also, the more you sound like you're into it, getting off on it, the more we'll get into it too because it enhances the fantasy.

Thanks for sharing! :D I hope you do more!

This has always been a great story, but to hear it read out has added a whole new dimension.

Is that your voice? Not that it matters... Whoever it was has the perfect voice for the story and did a wonderful job of reading it aloud.

I hope you record more of your stories to audio soon. Thanks!

Can't believe there haven't been any made, this was fantastic. It was very enjoyable to have one of your stories read aloud, and if that was you reading it I would love to hear some more from you.

Really good story..and your voice..And your reading is getting better.

Comment to the public, this is how a audio story is to sound, yes and thankyou I've never came harder. lol

Great reading of my favorite fantasy!

Ps

I want to fuck you too.

love yr voice !

Love the story the only you should done is slow down.

That story was sooooo hot.

Erron Black is a mortal komabat X character

A fan pointed that out to me, Anonymous. I wonder if one of the good people at Midway saw my work before they named him, hence their unusual spelling of the first name. My work preceded him by almost a decade.

This may be the best story on Literotica. Very well written and great subject matter written by someone who gets women and really hung men. The description of the blowjob and how that cum felt and tasted made me thirst for a mouthful myself!