All Comments on 'The Opening of Sara'

previous comment said you needed medical attention,well,as you know you are entitled to a second opinion so here it is-You need serious medical attention

I've enjoyed all your stories so far. The fantasy of being exposed in front of a group is extremely hot. Loved Sara as well. Golden shower fantasies are obviously not for everyone. I find the idea so dirty, so nasty, so taboo...but at the time compelling and exciting. The thought of surrendering as dozens pee on you is a fantastic submission fantasy. Would love to read more. Thanks!

The reviewers are the ones who require medical treatment, lobotomies specifically. Ignore the pathetic responses from these so called "reviewers". These individuals need to stop reading stories they obvious don't like, are not old enough to read and personally attacking writers they don't appreciate.

...but the comment Nazis are out in full force today and I just couldn't resist. When will those uneducated fools give up? They call everyone else names because everyone else is expressing ideas counter to their own. They can't argue logically, so they use insults to get their point across. Truly messed up. As for this story, don't bother. The writer seems to have no better than a 3rd grade education, at best, and it shows up in his grammar, punctuation, dialogue, and syntax. Literally, this is a wreck.

to the negative comments why do you even come to this site? i cannot wait to see some answers if they even have a backbone to do so.

hey, to revenger. the one who posted about the authoer needing medical help. your fetishes state "killing cheating wives" ...........and i hope that pic is really not you.

Guess they really don't have backbones. I'm curious, too, why someone would read a piece of erotic fiction, then feel compelled to attack the author. Let it go if you don't like it. Personally, I'm turned off by golden showers. So what? Liking them doesn't make one a bad person, just a different person. Hooray for freedom of speech.

. . . the outrageous, over-the-top, fetish exhuberation of the story. I could relish being either Sara or Alan. Imagine the lifetime of stories to be told in the heat of passion for a married couple to keep sexual heat alive. This is a well told tale.

. . . reigns supreme. This was a fun fantasy for a Saturday afternoon.

Adoration from a genuine unrepentant whore.

Agree with some of the comments.....the golden shower is not of any interest to me. The only thing that I thought was out of place was the old boss and his comments to the wife. Didn't think that there should have been any "attitudes" related to the evening. Actually wanted someone to punch his lights out