All Comments on 'The Opera'

hi, i liked how you managed to bring to life the 19th cent. setting throughout the story. that alone lifts it above average.

the sexual buildup was engrossing at first, but - as i'm sure many will also complain - the story ended a little too quickly after the climax, leaving the reader with confusion rather than interest.

i'm glad you brought music back into the story by the end, but it was lacking in the middle.

lastly, a few typos that would've been picked up easily on a proof read.

overall s good story :)