All Comments on 'The Optocynic 5000 Ch. 02'

HOT STORY !

Fantastic story, i can't wait to read the next!

It's great so far and I want more chapters. Maybe another shoot with the mother. And please, do not introduce another male character in the sex fun.

... not much of a plot. However, lots of fun anyway... or maybe because of it! Perhaps Mom could have a sister who might pose, then Mom and Aunt? Well done.

Hot story. Bring on chapter 3

Hmmm, sisters friends, moms coworkers, the girl next door, the chic behind the coffee counter, the cop that pulls you over because you're weaving due to mom blowing you while driving! You don't need much of a plot for this kind of stroke story.

Both the story's are great keep up the good work

Good story. Keep it Up. That's what we needed! His cock up my ass while we read this. He came inside me instead of on me. Shit it felt so good!!! TBC

I loved it. Start slow, finish hard and fast. I agre, chapter with mom and sis would be awesom. Let your imagination run amok!

Keep it up sir!

Definitely more to come so stay tuned!

Keep on writing - love this.

5/5

it is a good story but the anal ruined the whole thing especially sucking his dick after he fucked her in the ass.

The ass to mouth is hot as fuck.

I loved the original story, and I'm loving this new homage to the classic.

You need a chapter 3 where he hooks up with mom and Lois at the same time.

I loved it. Five big stars. Can't wait for chapter three!!

One hell of a story .5 star

I love these stories

Wow, one of the sexiest stories I've ever read! Keep on writing..........

i wish it wasn't anal, and i wish you wrote longer chapters or more stories in the series, but the writting is very descriptive and nice.

The plot is very hot, but i feel like the camera should sorta "hypnotize" them a bit more than that.