All Comments on 'The Orc and the Elf'

by UBelongOnUrKnees

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Very imaginative, powerful, and well written!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Sequel

You should make this story a sequel and/or a series. Really good.

hentaikittenhentaikittenalmost 7 years ago
Needs editing

Good story, but it would definitely benefit from a little editing.

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