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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 11 years ago
I think I know...

Good story and great writing.

xeriscapartistxeriscapartistover 11 years ago
love where this is going...

look forward to more!

newjaynenewjayneover 11 years ago
Excellent - can't wait for the next bit!

The only qualm I have was that it seemed to be a tiny bit rushed and I would have liked to little more about the characters' backgrounds. Even so, very good and very enjoyable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

cant wait for the next chapter may be a little longer if possible

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