All Comments on 'The Order Ch. 01'

Well, I guess it is a start. I give it three stars. The writing was good, the idea as well. However, was too short in what is going on to give it more. I look forward to future chapters though.

And if the resulting child is a baby boy ....?

Thank you for reading my story. I decided not to address this in the story, but I did give some thought to what becomes of pregnancies in this world.

The purpose of their ceremonies is not to conceive, but to take power. Children, if any are conceived, are given to the matriarchs. Female children might eventually find their way back to the Order. Male children would become the second-rate citizens they are in the world.