All Comments on 'The Other Kelly Taylor'

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theognistheognisover 13 years ago
*****

Excellent. Five stars.

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 13 years ago
Arrrggh!

Yes more please! Fabulous story and characters and a very naughty, teasing spirit throughout the narrative. You do please this dirty old man.

AzanianHeatAzanianHeatover 13 years ago
Amazing buildup

Fantastic start! Can't wait to read more.

eboniluv1eboniluv1over 13 years ago
LMFAO!!!! Brilliant Just Brilliant

Great start keep it up!!! I dont really like the teacher student relationship stories but this one is a keeper... LOL Keep up the great work

nighthawk22204nighthawk22204over 13 years ago
This is a long way from being finished...

I hope, because it is starting off as an excellent story. I anxiously await an overwhelming sensual dialogue between the lovers followed by a resounding climax, no matter how long it takes.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 13 years ago
Not usual for me to look at these, but I'm so glad I did

Liking the contrast myself as a rule, but this, I am eagerly awaiting for the description of this beautiful sounding girl.

Bring on the chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
the right way

it was indeed a pleasure to go through with this story. looking forward to read the other parts too. the author's mind is incredible as it brings the right contrasts and puts actual thoughts that can happen into right words

DaddysBabyslutDaddysBabyslutover 11 years ago

very hot and well written

NthGalake71NthGalake71over 11 years ago

Very passionate and sexy.. characters i can relate to and the emotions reminding me of days gone by hoping to one day feel that attraction for someone again the excitement.. Well Done

RichbigRichbigabout 11 years ago
ok

Listen to me, you can do better.. Rich Hit me up

RichbigRichbigabout 11 years ago
what was I thinking?

This story was wonderful. Forget previous post. I wanted to be her teacher so badly.

CinnerCinneralmost 11 years ago
No argument here...

This is a HOT story about a complex and forbidden love!

I'm favouriting this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Pedo

Initially gave off a pedo kinda vibe...

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