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All Comments on 'The Other Side'

by fallenintohell099

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Story structure incredibly poor.

Almost all paragraphs start with a noun or pronoun. Get an editor.

traddisagaintraddisagainalmost 3 years ago

a nothing, where,s the plot, don,t mind poor English but no start and no end.

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